Sequential Art: new and improved

I added stripes and a logo to the goalie and I feel that solved my "green" problem. I think that the white with blue stroke really holds the goalie together better. Also I reworked the final goalie and he is now more recognizable. I zoomed out on him and improved the padding and uniform so he could be recognized easier. I still think this could be better but I am satisfied for now.

Mojizu

I could not get the site to work for me but I have contacted their support people and I will see what I can do. So here he is. 

Sequential Art

Sequential Art

For my sequential piece I will do 3 illustrations for a children's book. I think I want them to be about hockey.