This is a really nice sequence. I especially like your second piece - the perspective makes it very interesting, and the carvings on the ice are a very nice touch. Well done!
Your colors and style look really nice in these pieces.. the ice looks really blue in the first one compared to the second.. maybe either add a little bit more light blue to the ice in the second one? i also like the carvings on the ice, maybe you should try to add some curved marks to the first one. Also, the last one is visually interesting, but i cant tell if he is scoring or if i am supposed to be viewing the puck from the back of the net? maybe the reader isn't supposed to know, but maybe add some sort of indication for the viewer on which angle they are supposed to be viewing the scene from. Nice job!
I like the very vivid color scheme. The skate marks add alot. Ido agree with steph that the last pic is a little confusing...maybe cramped compaired to the others. overall really good though.
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This is a really nice sequence. I especially like your second piece - the perspective makes it very interesting, and the carvings on the ice are a very nice touch. Well done!
Your colors and style look really nice in these pieces.. the ice looks really blue in the first one compared to the second.. maybe either add a little bit more light blue to the ice in the second one? i also like the carvings on the ice, maybe you should try to add some curved marks to the first one. Also, the last one is visually interesting, but i cant tell if he is scoring or if i am supposed to be viewing the puck from the back of the net? maybe the reader isn't supposed to know, but maybe add some sort of indication for the viewer on which angle they are supposed to be viewing the scene from. Nice job!
I like the very vivid color scheme. The skate marks add alot. Ido agree with steph that the last pic is a little confusing...maybe cramped compaired to the others. overall really good though.
Great dynamic perspective! Adds tons of interest.
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